.:Reposted:. Gift: Daytime Strolls~

I don't really make critiques or anything, but I'd like to contribute for something at the very least.

About the Vision-
It looks charming. I love the way that you gave Texture to everything ( Fur, hair, clothes ) But the reason I gave you 3.5 stars is mainly due to the lack of clothing texture and the Fur texture on the cute muzzle on the boy. You made it on the chest fur so nothing stops you from applying it to the face.
Other than the idea to add more texture, it looks really decent. It is really cute.

Originality-

That thing is something we all fail at. A cute couple, but that is all we get. The couple- If you gave it a background, or a developing action in the drawing, it would look even better. But it is the typical Girl and boy smile that everyone makes ( Blame me, I Have 2 of those in my shitty ass gallery ;D ), other than that the idea is repetitive, but quite classical ( Old But Gold! )

Technique-

As I said- I love the coloring. The problem is, the fur still ( Once again ) Needs texture, or probably a harsher shading. I love that you didn't blur it out, making it look like a cheap gradient flow, like most "artists" use to do nowadays. The main problem is the blending of the hair. If you stare enough, maybe, and just maybe you might see the boundary of the one's hair, just before blending into the other. Maybe using darker colors for the one and lighter for the other, or giving a greater contrast might give you better results. The lines also seem kind of shaky. I guess you need to edit your tablet settings Or mouse DPI.

The Impact-

It is really lovely as I said. It looks warm, cute and charming. I can't say anything negative about this one, the smile on the boy looks just so soothing and innocent, and so does the girl. A lovely piece.

Sorry if it sounded way too harsh or if I spammed the word "cute" too much ;D Trying to be less like Leafy xd